A tingly sensation surged through her as their lips met. Her eyes close gently, as if she were dreaming. She shivered and felt her cheeks blush as she reached her arms around the other person. Her knees weakened and her heart skipped more than just a beat. The moon above illuminated their figures and seemed to set the scene on fire. Forever seemed to pass, their lips locked in an eternal caress.
Suddenly, her eyes opened and she saw the sun creep in to her room. She let out a pained sigh. It was a dream, a simple dream that would never be fulfilled. She crawled out of bed and managed to stand on the floor. It was a wonderful dream though, but let her feeling empty every time she had it or thought about it. Such a kiss would be too beautiful. She would surely cry!
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Kyee! That was like my dream 2 nights ago! *squeals so girlish and swishes around nervously in her elegant gothic lolita frills (because in real life I'd never wear it)* It was so beautiful and romantic! *bubble scene, parted lips with glossy sheen, a slight blush blooming on her cheeks* His lips were as soft as moon-light kissing the ocean's waves, but it left a horrible emptiness like the light was lost down in the ocean's abyss! *tears forming at the corners of her eyes, she agonizingly bites down onto her handkerchief*
AND GOOD GOD WAS TONGUE HOTT! *dies* Sometimes it's really amazing how I feel everything in my dreams... but his kiss was very sweet. *laughs* Sorry... I had to ruin that whole bishoujo image of me. *shudders* Yeah, like I could ever look like that... *mutters to herself* Only in my head. *laughs*
I do love what you have written Baily! It made my heart skip a beat... well... it fluttered and so did my stomach... but in the best way it can!
Damn it! I'm so romantic! That is until I woke up and I was like, "Damn... he didn't go any further in my dream... YOU SUCK!" *LAUGHS*
Your writing skills have improved more. Very nice. Very eloquently described. Just be wary as sometimes that can get to be too much and bore your readers.